Sunday, 16 October 2011

Research sheet


Success Criteria 
17th October
1. I will try to link the rights to my issue.
2. I will focus on a few questions, but get a lot of detail to support my answers.

SC REFLECTION
I think I need to put more detail into my few questions (follow on tomorrow!).

18th October
- I can research information with detail
- I can pinpoint an individual and analyse their story

SC REFLECTION 
I can pinpoint the individual story, but now I need to work on seeing it from other people's perspectives and link on the IDEAL level ladder. 

31st October 
- I can write a "pre-verse" before my story that describes my issue and the rights removed.
- I will continue to write my story, but write it from a readers point of view, because they might not know or understand some of the knowledge I already know.

SC REFLECTION
I have written my "pre-verse" and now I need to analyse my story and try and see it from a readers point of view. 

1st November 
- I can feel empathy for other people and include it in my story.
- I can analyse people's feelings and different opinions.


SC REFLECTION
I have written things from the my main characters point of view, and have captured the emotions that they might feel.
I am writing from the point of view people who destroyed the main characters life.

3rd October
- I can work efficiently but quickly.
- I can analyse people's feelings and different opinions. 

SC REFLECTION
I've worked quickly and I think I can finish my outcome by tomorrow.

4th October  
- I can finish my outcome!
- I can end my outcome with a cliffhanger that makes people want to read more.


SC REFLECTION
 I've finished my outcome with a cliffhanger! WOOOO!


My Issue
My issue is asylum seekers. I am reading a book at the moment called The Other Hand, which follows the life of a Nigerian refugee trapped in a detention centre in the UK. I’m really interested in this and how it’s handled in different areas. That’s why I chose asylum seekers.
5w’s & H
What?
I’m going to research asylum seekers and how it is handled around the world. I want to find out some current issues and write a story about them.
Where?
Around the world.
Who?
Current refugees who have been badly treated.
When?
CURRENT!
Why?
I am reading a book at the moment called The Other Hand, which follows the life of a Nigerian refugee trapped in a detention centre in the UK. I’m really interested in this and how it’s handled in different areas.

Questions that you need to answer while researching your issue:

a)   What is your issue?
Asylum Seekers (difference between asylum seekers and refugees: asylum seeker are people who are waiting to here a decision from the government that is whether they can stay in the country, refugees are people who have heard a positive decision and they are allowed to stay in the country they  asylum from (actual definition: people who have fled from their home country for reasons of war, abandonment etc).


b)  How has the issue developed historically?


c)   Why is this issue considered a human rights issue?
This is a human rights issue because when you’re a refugee, it takes away the right to shelter. The organizations have to give you clean food and water, although the conditions aren’t very nice. 


d)  Who has been involved with this issue? (include people and/or organizations)
UNHCR (United Nations High Commissioner)


e)   What does the Universal Declaration of Rights or the Children’s Declaration of Rights say regarding this issue?  (Find the article/s and quote them here).


f)    Why do you feel that this issue is important?


g)   What responsibilities do we have as a society ensuring that this issue is taken seriously? 


h)  You may format your writing using the above headings, and it does not have to be in essay form.


Thursday, 13 October 2011

LI's and SC's of human right issues

LI
- To research relevant information
- To make decisions
- To find and issue

SC
1. I will try to link the rights to my issue.
2. I will focus on a few questions, but get a lot of detail to support my answers.

Thursday, 6 October 2011

WHO IS THIS BOY?

Learning Intentions - we will be learning...
To ask questions
To research
To construct a biography
To empathise and have an awareness of different situations

Success Criteria - what we need to do to achieve...
1. To understand different situations from different people.
2. To find relevant and detailed information that is reliable.
3. To be able to scan read and select and summarize the info.

 QUESTIONS AND ANSWERS
- Who is he?Iqbal Masih was boy from Muridke, Pakistan. who was forced to work at a carpet factory at the aged of 4. And he wanted to stop child labour.
- Who was his master/mistress?
His boss, Arshad
- Why did he die?
He got assassinated because he stood up for himself
- Why do we need to know about him?
We need to know about him because he helped an organization that protects children against child labour when he escaped from the factory that he was locked in.
We need to know about him because he helped an organization that protects children against child labour when he escaped from the factory that he was locked in.
- When was he born?
He was born on 1983.
- When did it happened?
It happened when he was only 10 years old.
- When did he die?
He died in 1995. he got shot at the back on his way back to church.
- Where is he from?
Pakistan
- Where DID he live?
Muridke
- Where does he live?
His grave is in Pakistan.
- Where are his parents?
His father left when he was very young. His mother or father sold him when he was only four (we don’t have enough proof which parent sold him).
- How is he famous?
He joined the Bonded Labor Liberation Front of Pakistan (BLLF) to help stop child labour all around the world at the age of 10.
- How old is he?
He was 12 years old when he died. He would be 29 years old this year if he didn't get assassinated.
- How did it affect him?
At the age of 12, he looked much younger than all the other twelve years old because of a lack of proper nutrition and years working in front of a loom.
- How did he die?
He got shot in the back.
- What does he do?
HE WORKED IN A CARPET FACTORY.
- What happened to his parents?
THEY SOLD HIM ONLY AT THE AGE OF FOUR TO A CARPET FACTORY.
- What’s his parents name?
Father: Saif Masih and Inayat Masih
- What happened to him?
Iqbal was sold to a man at a carpet factory at the age of four for the price of $12 USD. He escaped and helped an organisation raise awareness about child labour and helped free more than 3000 Pakistani children. He was assassinated walking back from church at the age of only12.
- What rights were taken away?
The right to freedom.
The right to be equal.
The right to clean food and water.
The right to develop and grow up mentally and phisically in a healthy way.
The right to be cared for.
The right to get help first.
The right not to be exploited.
The right to go to school.
The right to be loved.

Sunday, 2 October 2011

Does everyone have access to their rights?

 LI's (what should I have learned by the end of this task?)
- To know the 5W's of Amnesty International
- To evaluate whether everyone has acces to their human rights
- To reflect on others situation.

SC's (what do I have to do to meet these learning intentions?)
- To be able to find specific cases where rights are not applied (to empathise)
- To be able to move on to the Analyse bit on the Level Ladder.

I don't think everyone has access to their human rights, such as places in LEDC's (Less Economically Developed Countries). Children have to go to work, food and water aren't equal to everyone etc. But some countries in MEDC's are taking away freedom of thought/religion or in some countries such as Saudi Arabia women aren't even allowed to drive.

5W's Amnesty International
Who?
Amnesty International was founded by a lawyer called Peter Beneson.
What?
A non-profit / non-governmental organisation the protects human rights around the world.
Where?
It's worldwide in over 150 countries, but is based in London.
When?
Amnesty International was founded in July 1961.
Why?
Peter Beneson started this organisation thanks to two men from Portugal who "toasted (drunk) to liberty (freedom)!" He did not think this was write and also stated "Open your newspaper any day of the week and you will find a story from somewhere of someone being imprisoned, tortured or executed because his opinions or religion are unacceptable to his government."
OFFICIAL MISSION
"To conduct research and generate action to prevent and end grave abuses of human rights, and to demand justice for those whose rights have been violated."

Amnesty International Advert
How does it make you feel?
At first it scared me a little because of the breathing and he running. But then the music started to pick up and I felt more like standing up for myself and other people.
What does it suggest about people and their human rights?
It suggests that not everyone has rights applied to them. It suggests that people need to start standing up for these people.

Dividing up the scenes:
Sounds
Heart beat - breathing - dog barking - sewing - gunshots - whistle - paper ripping - bottle clanking - singing
People
1. Asylum seeker
2. Victim of child labour (girl sewing)
3. Child soldiers
4. A victim of being stripped of the right of expression
5. A victim of being stripped of the right to clean food and water
6. Monks (victim of being stripped of then right to chose own religion.